Thursday, July 18, 2019

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Title: character list Dr. Henry Jekyll- Is a well reputed and respected doctor. He is a wealthy man that was also born into a fortune. He had a good life growing up and is a kind man that has never done anything bad in his entire life until the creation of Hyde. He is well set and known in the community. Has a dark side that’s burning to be set free. As a result he creates a potion that separates one body into two people and personalities. Used to unleash his dark side which ultimately takes over in the end. He is friends with Lanyon a doctor, as well as Utterson a lawyer. Mr. Edward Hyde- Was not born, but created. Was the result of a potion Dr. Jekyll created that gives one’s self a second personality where the body strips away your civilized nature , brings you down to... (only first 800 chars shown) Analysis complete. Our feedback is listed below in printable form. Some of the items have been truncated or removed to provide better print compatibility. Title Checker Review Title Looks like we may have found a problem with your paper's title: †¢The first word of the title should be capitalized. †¢The last word of the title should be capitalized. Spelling Spelling Suggestions †¢Spelling: side thats [suggestions: that, that's, that s, tats, teats] Grammar Grammar Suggestions †¢Revise...: wealthy man that [suggestions: man who] †¢Revise...: kind man that [suggestions: man who] †¢Missing apostrophe: side thats [suggestions: that's] †¢Missing Article: loose all of Jekylls [suggestions: all of the Jekylls] †¢Missing apostrophe: that wouldnt [suggestions: wouldn't] †¢Did you mean...: that its the [suggestions: it's the] Word Choice Bad Phrase Score Bad Phrase Score*: 2.244 (lower is better) *based on the number and qualit... ...eater usage of vocabulary words. Although your vocabulary score is within the average range for most writers, boosting it above 60 will help your paper stand out. Consider using the Vocab Builder. Tips Whether you are writing for a school assignment or professionally, it is imperative that you have a vocabulary that will provide for clear communication of your ideas and thoughts. You need to know the type and level of your audience and adjust your vocabulary accordingly. It is worthwhile to constantly work at improving your knowledge of words. To help with this task, please consider using our Vocabulary Builder to improve your comprehension and usage of words. Grade Incompatible Paper Type The Auto-Grading feature is only compatible with certain types of submissions (e.g., Essays, Research Papers, etc.), yet the paper type listed for this submission is Other

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